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I was learning to use descriptive language. I found it difficult to think of a lie because I couldn't think of anything. I enjoyed this task because I like writing. Next time I would like to use more adjectives to enhance my writing.
Good afternoon Olivia, I really like how you did the rainbow at the first page. I would really like to see some more writing. Next time you could add a bit more detai.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments: Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let me know that you have read, watched or listened to my blog Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question
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Good afternoon Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you did the rainbow at the first page.
I would really like to see some more writing. Next time you could add a bit more detai.
Ma te wa Ruby
But good job anyway
Deletethank you ruby
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